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Amoeba: /* Evocations of Cloudbreak */

2021-10-05T14:46:24Z

Evocations of Cloudbreak

Amoeba: /* Pilvenrako */

2021-09-29T18:56:48Z

Pilvenrako

Amoeba: /* Pilvenrako */

2021-09-29T18:25:39Z

Pilvenrako

Amoeba (28. syyskuuta 2021 kello 20.52)

2021-09-28T20:52:24Z

Amoeba: /* Pilvenrako */

2021-09-28T16:54:40Z

Pilvenrako

Amoeba: /* Evocations of Cloudbreak */

2021-09-28T16:44:00Z

Evocations of Cloudbreak

Amoeba (21. syyskuuta 2021 kello 20.37)

2021-09-21T20:37:30Z

Amoeba (22. elokuuta 2021 kello 18.09)

2021-08-22T18:09:20Z

Amoeba: /* Storm-Wracked Seas Chaos */

2020-11-30T21:08:51Z

Storm-Wracked Seas Chaos

Amoeba: /* Swinging Deck Vertigo */

2020-09-17T12:02:48Z

Swinging Deck Vertigo

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 '''Prerequisites:''' Distracting Glare Reflection
-As the Sun breaks through the clouds, suddenly blinding, it allows the well-prepared to vanish.  When the anima of anyone else within one range band is raised above Glowing, or when they perform a 2- or 3-dice stunt, you may attempt to re-establish stealth as an Reflexive action.
+As the Sun breaks through the clouds, suddenly blinding, it allows the well-prepared to vanish.  When the anima of anyone else within Short range is raised above Glowing, or when they perform a 2- or 3-dice stunt, you may attempt to re-establish stealth as an Reflexive action.
 ==== Sunbeam-Racing Haste ====
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 '''Prerequisites:''' Distracting Glare Reflection
-As a ray of light races across the landscape, so can the Chosen make haste.  When you activate the charm, your anima must be at Glowing or higher level.  Choose one opponent; when they move, you may keep them at the same distance by paying 3m.  This charm ends if your anima goes below Glowing.
+As a ray of light races across the landscape, so can the Chosen make haste.  When you activate the charm, your anima must be at Glowing or higher level.  Choose one opponent within Short range; when they move, you may keep them at the same distance by paying 3m.  This charm ends if your anima goes below Glowing.
 ==== Sun-Covered Skin of Bronze ====

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 == Pilvenrako ==
-(3-dot Orichalcum Chain Shirt, Artifact •••)
+(Orichalcum Chain Shirt, Artifact •••)
 On a small island on the edges of the Skullstone Archipelago, there was an ancient, tiny, well-hidden tomb, emptied of everything but what appeared to be a simple orichalcum circlet.  The young Solar that happened upon this tomb dared to place the circlet upon his brow, and soon heard whispers, guiding him after the trail of an quite maculate Air Caste.  After a few odd turns of events while on the hunt, he finally catched up to the Dragonblood, and attempted to do battle.  Unfortunately, he was unable to strike a decisive blow, nor corner his prey, until in a fit of inspiration, he transferred the circlet to rest upon the head of his opponent.  The Air Caste went instantly comatose – but when touching the circlet once more, the Solar felt a great apprehension.  He therefore simply took from his defeated opponent the armor they had worn, which had prominently figured in the murals of the tomb, and went upon his way to other adventures in the West.  What became of the Dragonblood is not known.
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 Cloudbreak is a plain and simple Orichalcum chain shirt, notable only for it's tendency to catch sunlight when openly worn.  It was  made for newly exalted Solars in an Age when they were expected to soon progress to greater things; it's previous wearers were most likely Zenith or Night castes.  It features a single hearthstone socket in the braiding that forms the neckline.
-'''Attunement:''' 5 <BR/>
+'''Attunement:''' 4m <BR/>
-'''Type:''' Light (+x Soak) <BR/>
+'''Type:''' Light (Soak +5, Hardness 4, Mobility Penalty -0) <BR/>
-'''Tags:'''  <BR/>
+'''Tags:''' Concealable <BR/>
 '''Hearthstone slots:''' 1 <BR/>
 '''Era:''' The Centuries of a Thousand Worlds
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 === Evocations of Cloudbreak ===
-The powers of Cloudbreak evoke the themes of a sunbeam breaking though a rift in clouds.  For the attuned wearer, each time they raise their anima to a new level, they gain 1 initiative.  This bonus may be gained only once per anima level in a scene.  Additionally, when their anima is lowered by sources other than Cloudbreak, they gain 1 mote.
+The powers of Cloudbreak evoke the themes of a sunbeam breaking through a rift in clouds.  For the attuned wearer, each time they raise their anima to a new level, they gain 1 initiative.  This bonus may be gained only once per anima level in a scene.  Additionally, when their anima is lowered by sources other than Cloudbreak, they gain 1 mote.
 ==== Distracting Glare Reflection ====

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 ==== Surrounding Shadow Disappearance ====
-'''Cost:''' m; '''Mins:''' Essence 2<BR/>
+'''Cost:''' 3m; '''Mins:''' Essence 2<BR/>
 '''Type:''' Reflexive<BR/>
-'''Keywords:''' None<BR/>
+'''Keywords:''' Mute<BR/>
 '''Duration:''' Instant<BR/>
 '''Prerequisites:''' Distracting Glare Reflection
-As the Sun breaks through the clouds, suddenly blinding, it allows the well-prepared to to vanish.  When the anima of anyone else within one range band is raised above Glowing, or when anyone else performs a 2- or 3-dice stunt, you may attempt to establish stealth.  Todo effect & cost...
+As the Sun breaks through the clouds, suddenly blinding, it allows the well-prepared to vanish.  When the anima of anyone else within one range band is raised above Glowing, or when they perform a 2- or 3-dice stunt, you may attempt to re-establish stealth as an Reflexive action.
 ==== Sunbeam-Racing Haste ====
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 '''Resonant:''' By paying 8m, you may choose to instead heal a single bashing health level from two different targets or an aggravated health level from one target.
 == Joutuva Taimikko ==

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 '''Duration:''' <BR/>
 '''Prerequisites:''' Crashing Wave Empties the Deck, Rip-Tide Drags to the Fathoms
 == Pilvenrako ==
-(3-dot Orichalcum Chain Shirt)
+(3-dot Orichalcum Chain Shirt, Artifact •••)
-<!-- Dim, Glowing, Burning, Bonfire/Iconic -->
+On a small island on the edges of the Skullstone Archipelago, there was an ancient, tiny, well-hidden tomb, emptied of everything but what appeared to be a simple orichalcum circlet.  The young Solar that happened upon this tomb dared to place the circlet upon his brow, and soon heard whispers, guiding him after the trail of an quite maculate Air Caste.  After a few odd turns of events while on the hunt, he finally catched up to the Dragonblood, and attempted to do battle.  Unfortunately, he was unable to strike a decisive blow, nor corner his prey, until in a fit of inspiration, he transferred the circlet to rest upon the head of his opponent.  The Air Caste went instantly comatose – but when touching the circlet once more, the Solar felt a great apprehension.  He therefore simply took from his defeated opponent the armor they had worn, which had prominently figured in the murals of the tomb, and went upon his way to other adventures in the West.  What became of the Dragonblood is not known.
-=== Menneisyys ===
+Cloudbreak is a plain and simple Orichalcum chain shirt, notable only for it's tendency to catch sunlight when openly worn.  It was  made for newly exalted Solars in an Age when they were expected to soon progress to greater things; it's previous wearers were most likely Zenith or Night castes.  It features a single hearthstone socket in the braiding that forms the neckline.
-=== Nykyisyys ===
+'''Attunement:''' 5 <BR/>
-Kallonkiven saarelta löytyi muuten tyhjä hauta, mutta oli otsaripa, jonka kautta kuului etäisiä kaikuja kauan sitten kuolleesta Yö-kastin aurinkoisesta.  Sen auttamana lähti jahtaamaan jotain pahaa(?) tehnyttä Ilma-kastia (jos Keisarikuntaa niin ei julkisesti).  Muutamien käänteiden jälkeen kohtasi, ei saanut lyötyä taistelussa, mutta sai painettua otsaripan Ilma-kastin päähän joka veti sen tajuttomaksi.  Merisaukko yritti ottaa otsaripaa takaisin, mutta tuli pahat vibat joten ottikin vain panssarin.   Ilma-kastin tämänhetkinen tila tai paikka ei tiedossa.
+'''Type:''' Light (+x Soak) <BR/>
 === Evocations of Cloudbreak ===
-The powers of Cloudbreak evoke the themes of a sunbeam breaking though a rift in clouds.  For the attuned wearer, each time they raise their anima to a new level, they gain 1 initiative.  This bonus may be gained only once per level per scene.  Additionally, when their anima is lowered by sources other than Cloudbreak, they gain 1 mote.
+The powers of Cloudbreak evoke the themes of a sunbeam breaking though a rift in clouds.  For the attuned wearer, each time they raise their anima to a new level, they gain 1 initiative.  This bonus may be gained only once per anima level in a scene.  Additionally, when their anima is lowered by sources other than Cloudbreak, they gain 1 mote.
 ==== Distracting Glare Reflection ====
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 '''Cost:''' 1a, 1m+ '''Mins:''' Essence 1<BR/>
 '''Type:''' Supplemental<BR/>
-'''Keywords:''' None<BR/>
+'''Keywords:''' Resonant<BR/>
 '''Duration:''' Instant<BR/>
 A glance at the Sun where one thought would be just clouds can leave one momentarily blinded.  When you attempt to disengage, your anima flares, then fades, allowing you to pay 1m to convert a dice to a success, up to a maximum of your Essence.
 ==== Surrounding Shadow Disappearance ====
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 '''Cost:''' m; '''Mins:''' Essence 2<BR/>
 '''Type:''' Reflexive<BR/>
-'''Keywords:''' <BR/>
+'''Keywords:''' None<BR/>
-'''Duration:''' <BR/>
+'''Duration:''' Instant<BR/>
 '''Prerequisites:''' Distracting Glare Reflection
-As the Sun breaks through the clouds, suddenly blinding, it allows the well-prepared to to vanish.  When the anima of anyone else is raised above Glowing, or when anyone else performs a 2- to 3-dice stunt, you may attempt to establish stealth.  Todo...
+As the Sun breaks through the clouds, suddenly blinding, it allows the well-prepared to to vanish.  When the anima of anyone else within one range band is raised above Glowing, or when anyone else performs a 2- or 3-dice stunt, you may attempt to establish stealth.  Todo effect & cost...
 ==== Sunbeam-Racing Haste ====
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 '''Cost:''' 1 Wp; (3m/use) '''Mins:''' Essence 2<BR/>
 '''Type:''' Simple<BR/>
-'''Keywords:''' <BR/>
+'''Keywords:''' None<BR/>
-'''Duration:''' <BR/>
+'''Duration:''' Indefinite<BR/>
 '''Prerequisites:''' Distracting Glare Reflection
 As a ray of light races across the landscape, so can the Chosen make haste.  When you activate the charm, your anima must be at Glowing or higher level.  Choose one opponent; when they move, you may keep them at the same distance by paying 3m.  This charm ends if your anima goes below Glowing.
-==== ToDo name ====
+==== Sun-Covered Skin of Bronze ====
-'''Cost:''' m; '''Mins:''' Essence 2<BR/>
+'''Cost:''' 2a, 2m+; '''Mins:''' Essence 2<BR/>
-'''Type:''' <BR/>
+'''Type:''' Reflexive<BR/>
-'''Keywords:''' <BR/>
+'''Keywords:''' None<BR/>
-'''Duration:''' <BR/>
+'''Duration:''' Instant<BR/>
 '''Prerequisites:''' Distracting Glare Reflection
-ToDo description
+As a strike closes in on the bearer of Cloudbreak, their anima coalesces on their skin, granting temporary protection.  You gain +2 Soak against an attack, and may spend an additional 1m to gain +1 Soak, up to a maximum of your Essence.
 ==== Burst of Healing Sunlight ====
-'''Cost:''' m; '''Mins:''' Essence 3<BR/>
+'''Cost:''' 1 Wp, 3m+; '''Mins:''' Essence 3<BR/>
-'''Type:''' <BR/>
+'''Type:''' Reflexive<BR/>
-'''Keywords:''' <BR/>
+'''Keywords:''' Dissonant, Resonant<BR/>
-'''Duration:''' <BR/>
+'''Duration:''' Instant<BR/>
-'''Prerequisites:''' Surrounding Shadow Disappearance, Sunbeam-Racing Haste, ToDo name
+'''Prerequisites:''' Surrounding Shadow Disappearance, Sunbeam-Racing Haste, Sun-Covered Skin of Bronze
 == Joutuva Taimikko ==

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 == Pilvenrako ==
 (3-dot Orichalcum Chain Shirt)
 === Menneisyys ===
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 === Evocations of Cloudbreak ===
-The powers of Cloudbreak evokes the themes of a sunbeam breaking though a rift in clouds.  For the attuned wearer, each time they raise their anima to a new level, they gain 1 initiative.  This bonus may be gained only once per level per scene.  Additionally, when their anima is lowered by sources other than Cloudbreak, they gain 1 mote.
+The powers of Cloudbreak evoke the themes of a sunbeam breaking though a rift in clouds.  For the attuned wearer, each time they raise their anima to a new level, they gain 1 initiative.  This bonus may be gained only once per level per scene.  Additionally, when their anima is lowered by sources other than Cloudbreak, they gain 1 mote.
 ==== Distracting Glare Reflection ====
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 '''Prerequisites:''' Distracting Glare Reflection
-As the Sun breaks through the clouds, suddenly blinding, it allows the well-prepared to to vanish.  When the anima of anyone else is raised above _otsavalo_, or when anyone else performs a 2- to 3-dice stunt, you may attempt to establish stealth.  Todo...
+As the Sun breaks through the clouds, suddenly blinding, it allows the well-prepared to to vanish.  When the anima of anyone else is raised above Glowing, or when anyone else performs a 2- to 3-dice stunt, you may attempt to establish stealth.  Todo...
 ==== Sunbeam-Racing Haste ====
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 '''Prerequisites:''' Distracting Glare Reflection
-As a ray of light races across the landscape, so can the Chosen make haste.  When you activate the charm, your anima must be at _otsavalo_ or higher level.  Choose one opponent; when they move, you may keep them at the same distance by paying 3m.  This charm ends if your anima goes below _otsavalo_.
+As a ray of light races across the landscape, so can the Chosen make haste.  When you activate the charm, your anima must be at Glowing or higher level.  Choose one opponent; when they move, you may keep them at the same distance by paying 3m.  This charm ends if your anima goes below Glowing.
 ==== ToDo name ====

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 === Menneisyys ===
-Nuoren Yö-kastilaisen ensimmäinen panssari.
+Nuoren Aurinkoisen (Kasti: Yö? Keskipäivä?) ensimmäinen panssari.
 === Nykyisyys ===
 Kallonkiven saarelta löytyi muuten tyhjä hauta, mutta oli otsaripa, jonka kautta kuului etäisiä kaikuja kauan sitten kuolleesta Yö-kastin aurinkoisesta.  Sen auttamana lähti jahtaamaan jotain pahaa(?) tehnyttä Ilma-kastia (jos Keisarikuntaa niin ei julkisesti).  Muutamien käänteiden jälkeen kohtasi, ei saanut lyötyä taistelussa, mutta sai painettua otsaripan Ilma-kastin päähän joka veti sen tajuttomaksi.  Merisaukko yritti ottaa otsaripaa takaisin, mutta tuli pahat vibat joten ottikin vain panssarin.   Ilma-kastin tämänhetkinen tila tai paikka ei tiedossa.
-=== Voimat ===
+=== Evocations of Cloudbreak ===
-Athetics, Stealth.

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 ==== Swinging Deck Vertigo ====
-'''Cost:''' 2m; '''Mins:''' Essence 1<BR/>
+'''Cost:''' 2m; '''Mins:''' Essence 2<BR/>
 '''Type:''' Supplemental<BR/>
 '''Keywords:''' Resonant, Withering-Only, Stackable<BR/>
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 When Surface Current connects with an opponent, a pulse of essence pushes through them, down their legs and on to the bottom of their feet, keeping them off-balance.  If the withering damage done was greater than the (Essence) of the opponent, they suffer a special -1 onslaught penalty that lasts as long as the wielder keeps the opponent as their primary focus.  This effect is cumulative, up to the wielder's (Essence) in penalties, but it does decrease by one each turn that the wielder does not act against that opponent.
 '''Resonant:''' The penalty is applied when the wielder lowers their opponent below their own initiative, even if the damage was not greater than the opponents (Essence).
 ==== Mendaciously Smooth Shorewaters ====