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 Essence Wings: 5 motes per scene -> glowing golden Essence wings, wingspan of 4 yard. Fly at 20 yards per tick. Travel: 6 motes per Ess hours, travel 100mph, limited maneuverability: roll (Dex + Ath) diff 1 for any sudden change in course.
 [[Jokimetsän laulu|Kamppiksen sivulle]]
 [[Jokimetsän laulu:Jalava|Takaisin Jalavaan]]

@@ Rivi 265: / Rivi 265: @@
 | Sledgehammer Fist Punch || MArts || 3m || Instant || Suppl || Obv || Anima flares. Doubles raw damage against inanimate object, ignores soak. || <small>242</small>
 |-
-| Dragon Coil Technique || MArts || 3m || Until next action || Refl (1) ||  || +3 in dice pools to inflict, maintain and control clinch. Clinch crush damage lethal and +3 dam. Bonuses don't count to dice caps. || <small>242</small>
+| Dragon Coil Technique || MArts || 3m || Until next action || Refl (1) ||  || +4 in dice pools to inflict, maintain and control clinch. Clinch crush damage lethal and +4 dam. Bonuses don't count to dice caps. || <small>242</small>
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 | Solar Hero Form || MArts || 6m || Scene || Simple || Obv || Kämmeniin syttyy kirkas kalpean kultainen valo, joka hohtaa suljetun nyrkinkin sormien raoista. Spend one mote in step 7 to count the successes of unarmed MArts attack twice for the purposes of determining damage. +5 to natural bashing and lethal soak. || <small>242</small>
 |-
-| Heaven Thunder Hammer || MArts || 2m/3m || Instant || Refl. ||  || Throw enemy backward three yards for each point of pre-soak damage. || <small>242</small>
+| Heaven Thunder Hammer || MArts || 2m/3m || Instant || Refl. ||  || Throw enemy backward three yards for each point of pre-soak damage. Spend +1 mote for 20 yard extra range.|| <small>242</small>
 |-
-| Hammer on Iron Technique || MArts || 3m 1wp || Instant || Extra Action ||  || 6 attacks against any targets. No multiple action penalties. DV penalty equal to the highest penalty for any one attack. || <small>243</small>
+| Hammer on Iron Technique || MArts || 3m 1wp || Instant || Extra Action ||  || 7 attacks against any targets. No multiple action penalties. DV penalty equal to the highest penalty for any one attack. || <small>243</small>
 |-
 | Body-Mending Meditation || Res || 10m || Until the day ends || Suppl ||  || Meditate an hour or stunt, roll Sta+Res. Success speeds healing rate by a factor of 10 or helps Wound-Mending Care Techn. || <small>208</small>
@@ Rivi 287: / Rivi 287: @@
 | Spirit-Cutting Attack || Occult || 1m || Instant || Suppl || Obv || Hit dematerialized, aggravated damage to spirits || <small>221</small>
 |-
-| Ghost-Eating Technique || Occult || 2m || Instant || Refl (10) || Obv  || Consumes spirit. Transfers 6 motes from spirit to Jalava || <small>221</small>
+| Ghost-Eating Technique || Occult || 2m || Instant || Refl (10) || Obv  || Consumes spirit. Drains 8 motes from spirit, for fueling Spirit-Cutting attacks || <small>221</small>
 |-
 | Judge's Ear Technique || Inv || 3m || Scene || Refl (1) || C-OK  || Recognize deliberate lies and deliberate use of half-truths. If another Charm contests, add Ess in automatic success to Per+Inv roll. || <small>213</small>

@@ Rivi 37: / Rivi 37: @@
 | Athletics || {{WWDots3}} || '''Bureaucracy''' || {{WWDots0}} || MArts: armored || {{WWDots1}}
 |-
-| Awareness || {{WWDots3}} || Linguistics || {{WWDots3}} ||  || {{WWDots0}}
+| Awareness (+2 visor) || {{WWDots3}} || Linguistics || {{WWDots3}} ||  || {{WWDots0}}
 |-
 | Dodge || {{WWDots3}} || Ride || {{WWDots0}} ||  || {{WWDots0}}
@@ Rivi 71: / Rivi 71: @@
+|
 | colspan=2 align="right" | {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}}
-| align="center" | {{WWDotF}} {{WWDotF}} {{WWDotF}} {{WWDotE}} {{WWDotE}} {{WWDotE}}
+| align="center" | {{WWDotF}} {{WWDotF}} {{WWDotF}} {{WWDotF}} {{WWDotE}} {{WWDotE}}
 |-
 | Mental Parry DV: 1
 | -4
 | align="right" colspan=2 | {{WWBox}}
-| Personal: 16 <small>(Max)</small> ___<small>(Curr.)</small>
+| Personal: 19 <small>(Max)</small> ___<small>(Curr.)</small>
 |-
 | Join combat: 6 + 2 (visor)
 | colspan=2 | Incapacitated
 | align="right" | {{WWBox}}
-| Peripheral: 40 <small>(Max)</small> ___<small>(Curr.)</small>
+| Peripheral: 47 <small>(Max)</small> ___<small>(Curr.)</small>
 |-
 | Join debate: 6 + 2
@@ Rivi 148: / Rivi 148: @@
 | (+Fists of Iron) || 5 || 13 || 12L || 8 || 3 ||  ||
+|
 |-
 | Fists of Iron Technique ||  || +1 || +2L ||  ||  ||  ||

@@ Rivi 1: / Rivi 1: @@
 {| style="width:100%;"
 |-
-| style="width:25%" | Nimi: Laakson Kultainen Jalava, <small>(Kurogu, Nomun klaanista) </small>|| style="width:75%" | Motivaatio: Korjata Byrokratia
+| style="width:25%" | Nimi: Laakson Kultainen Jalava, <small>(Kuroga, Nomun klaanista) </small>|| style="width:75%" | Motivaatio: Korjata Byrokratia
 |-
 | Kasti: Aamu || Anima: Jalavan kultaiset lehdet ja lopulta itse puu

@@ Rivi 107: / Rivi 107: @@
 | || align="right" | {{WWBox}}{{WWBox}}{{WWBox}}{{WWBox}}{{WWBox}}
 |-
-| (+Fists of Orichalcum) || 6 || 14 || 6L || - || 2 ||  ||
+| (+Fists of Orich.) || 6 || 14 || 6L || - || 2 ||  ||
 | Conviction || align="right" | {{WWDots3}}
 |-
@@ Rivi 116: / Rivi 116: @@
 | Temperance || align="right" | {{WWDots3}}
 |-
-| (+Fists of Orichalcum) || 5 || 15 || 6L || 7 || 3 ||  ||
+| (+Fists of Orich.) || 5 || 15 || 6L || 7 || 3 ||  ||
 | || align="right" | {{WWBox}}{{WWBox}}{{WWBox}}{{WWBox}}{{WWBox}}
 |-
@@ Rivi 128: / Rivi 128: @@
+|
 |-
-| (+Fists of Orichalcum) || 6 || 25 || 18L || - || - ||  ||
+| (+Fists of Orich.) || 6 || 25 || 18L || - || - ||  ||
+|
 |-
@@ Rivi 134: / Rivi 134: @@
+|
 |-
-| (+Fists of Orichalcum) || 5 || 15 || 21L || 7 || 3 ||  ||
+| (+Fists of Orich.) || 5 || 15 || 21L || 7 || 3 ||  ||
+|
 |-
@@ Rivi 140: / Rivi 140: @@
+|
 |-
-| (+Fists of Orichalcum) || 5 || 15 || 13L || 7 || 3 ||  ||
+| (+Fists of Orich.) || 5 || 15 || 13L || 7 || 3 ||  ||
+|
 |-
@@ Rivi 165: / Rivi 165: @@
 | colspan=2  | Orichalcum Chain Shirt
 | colspan=2 align="center" | 13L/11B/7A
-| colspan=2 align="center" | 3L / 3B
+| colspan=2 align="center" | 3L/3B
 |  ||
 | align="center" | 2
@@ Rivi 172: / Rivi 172: @@
 | colspan=2 | (yhteensä formin kanssa)
 | colspan=2 align="center" | 18L/16B/7A
-| colspan=2 align="center" | 3L / 3B
+| colspan=2 align="center" | 3L/3B
 | align="center" |
 | align="center" |
@@ Rivi 180: / Rivi 180: @@
 | colspan=2 | Orichalcum Reinforced Breastplate
 | colspan=2 align="center" | 18L/17B/12A
-| colspan=2 align="center" | 9L / 9B
+| colspan=2 align="center" | 9L/9B
 | align="center" | -1
 | align="center" | 1
@@ Rivi 188: / Rivi 188: @@
 | colspan=2 | (yhteensä formin kanssa)
 | colspan=2 align="center" | 23L/22B/12A
-| colspan=2 align="center" | 9L / 9B
+| colspan=2 align="center" | 9L/9B
 | align="center" |
 | align="center" |
@@ Rivi 195: / Rivi 195: @@
 | colspan=2 | Royal Warstrider "Toivontuoja"
 | colspan=2 align="center" | 32L/32B/26A
-| colspan=2 align="center" | 13L / 13B
+| colspan=2 align="center" | 13L/13B
 | align="center" | -2
 | align="center" | 2
@@ Rivi 202: / Rivi 202: @@
 | colspan=2 | (yhteensä formin kanssa)
 | colspan=2 align="center" | 37L/37B/26A
-| colspan=2 align="center" | 13L / 13B
+| colspan=2 align="center" | 13L/13B
 | align="center" |
 | align="center" |
@@ Rivi 209: / Rivi 209: @@
 | colspan=2 | Orich. Celestial Battle Armor
 | colspan=2 align="center" | 20L/20B/14A
-| colspan=2 align="center" | 9L / 9B
+| colspan=2 align="center" | 9L/9B
 | align="center" | 0
 | align="center" | 1
@@ Rivi 216: / Rivi 216: @@
 | colspan=2 | (yhteensä formin kanssa)
 | colspan=2 align="center" | 25L/25B/14A
-| colspan=2 align="center" | 9L / 9B
+| colspan=2 align="center" | 9L/9B
 | align="center" |
 | align="center" |

@@ Rivi 63: / Rivi 63: @@
 | align="center" | {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}}
 |-
-| Movement: 5 / 11
+| Movement: 5 / 11 (CBA *2, tai 20 yards/tick flight)
 | -2
 | colspan=2 align="right" | {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBox}} {{WWBoxF}} {{WWBoxF}}